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I Wonder If You Knew
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I Wonder If You Knew |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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I wonder if you knew how lost I was in you. I felt your tears, your joy. Even your fears, became mine. I was living your time. Your hours, your minutes yes, I was living in it. Your space included me I saw what you see, and when you left I forgot the person I was, now I'm not. WhiteRose |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very good write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very sad and heartfelt! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Anne, I feel your tears in this write, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well dear friend of mine...I love having you here with us! Thanks for coming...and leaving such wonderful poetry for us to read. hugs to you always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nice poem WhiteRose....I see you are a Carolinian too....Welcome to Passions... |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Passing Shadows..I just happened to stumble in. Nice to see some old friends here. (((HuGGles))) Magnus..Thank you for the welcome. Yes, I too live in the very dry state of SC. Hoping for rain. Nice to see a fellow Carolinian here. [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (07-24-2002 06:07 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
WhiteRose, But you are the person your were, let her come through... BC |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Anne This was wonderfully written with an important message. I'll look forward to reading more of your work. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Anne, so true and sad..sometimes we get so engrossed in our significant half's life that we forget to mature as a human being ourself... nicely written and welcome to passions!  [This message has been edited by faterider (07-24-2002 11:12 PM).] |
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