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the door |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Windows crystalline fumble for doors not finding the damn frame of reference I could’ve sworn was here right here I need my arm around you desperately your hand in mine I find the door Forgetting all I'm lacking |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and still within your fingertips you hold the freedom of the key... the door... seems you've found it, luvie! and still your write begs questions...now I'm spinning into Aldous Huxley... grin..but that's just ME. heh heh loved this |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
The door is so much easier to find when there’s another hand isn’t it? so glad you found this one darlin  The door seems elusive, can’t find the way Then suddenly opens one bright new day I’ll enter it with you, to see what’s behind We’ll go through together and see what we find A world full of peace, a life filled with care Once seemed elusive, but always, was there Awaken to morning, awaken to sun Awaken my darling, a new life begun (okay, so a little lame...whaddya want at this time of the morning??? I'm still on my first coffee!! Lol) Everything is possible in the game of life (Simple Minds-Promised You a Miracle) [This message has been edited by Tracey (06-14-2002 08:00 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nicely said Duncan.... It's so much easier with someone's hand on yours. ~Morning Hugs~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, First you have to find the hand. Enjoyed |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
I enjoyed. Always liked the poetic concept of "doors". Ever read the "Doors of Perception" by Huxley? |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Nice of expression of longing... loved this! ~R.T. "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
With the hand in yours the door will open effortlessly....Well said.... Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great write! The door is there and the experiences lie beyond...Oh for that companion's hand of love....good work this! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I need my arm around you desperately your hand in mine I find the door ====================== somehow me moth instincts thinks lots of doors will be opening.. "no more tears left to hide we have made it through a long and lonely nite ... better days are on our side ... well it looks as though we're doing something right" M.M. You ... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This makes me happy. And I like the door/frame of reference. Good word play. Sandra |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Hello D, great poem here. Funny, I'm about to post a poem about a door.  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Yhe value of doors hinges on good knobs...this one is worth a hand  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very good job, Duncan... Door...frame of reference... all so much easier with a hand to hold. I'm so glad you found it.  ~ lots of hugsLyra |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
You've shared another great write PoetFriendDuncan and I thank you4this enjoyed read2nite... Hugs2u... *~coco~* |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
all it takes is a nice tender arm around the one you love, to fend off any sadness |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You're just too good!!! Loved the reference! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggsssssss) Oh Duncan, this is soooooo beautifully sad, sweet friend, I hope you have a shoulder to lean over and cry now and to hold lovingly a hand, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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