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Breathless |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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I woke up troubled and in a sweat the sheets were wrinkled the bed was wet. I don't know what made me wake what made my body start to shake. I was breathless out of control it was then I felt you touched my soul. I heard you whisper in my ear go back to sleep for I am near. And with those words so sweet and true I drifted off to sleep with you. WhiteRose |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very interesting read!Well done! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
WhiteRose Well done enjoyed the read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nice! Enjoyed so much! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
whiterose, wonderful poem which i enjoyed so much! though i don't come to open poetry much this is by far the favorite one i have read here so far...i'll be around a little more from now on... life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
We have met before, haven't we? *S* Welcome... it's good to read your work again. *S* |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
It's been awhile. It's nice to see you old friend. I've been away. Out on the road travelling the country in a big truck. I don't recommend it. :-) The sites were nice, but the travelling part was a little hard. I see some other familiar people in here too. I feel like I'm home again. HuGs |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
This is tenderly sweet. Enjoyed! Deb |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
very well written.. i enjoyed this post.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, may true love forever touch your heart and make you happy forever! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
very nice dreamin'  Poetry is: |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Very nice write Rose, and good to see you here at Passions. Hugs. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms rose.....lovely dance of dreams ms enjoyed it |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
This was absolutely beautiful! Juanita |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you each and every one who commented on this poem. You have all made me feel welcome and I appreciate it. |
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