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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Revelation The trophic of a tropic smile Brings golden glitter to an Isle Where waves of soft caressing air Bring dreams to me of golden bare. I swim beneath a shading palm Away from all, well lost in charm Enamored leisure near to swoon Above a corals blooming dune And butterflies of lazy fins Swim in and out in azures prim With sparkling gold and silver turn Amidst the swaying green of churn An Eden that I lost, once mine A paradise, of older brine Lost to curiosity An asinine pomposity And I can only watch agleam With inner thoughts of chance redeem |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"An asinine pomposity" SY...SWEETHEART...it will all look better in the past--grin. So happy to see ya here my friend! lift of the coffee mug to ya. You've been missed. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The trophic of a tropic smile ============================== I swim beneath a shading palm Away from all, well lost in charm Enamored leisure near to swoon Above a corals blooming dune And butterflies of lazy fins Swim in and out in azures prim ===================================== An Eden that I lost, once mine A paradise, of older brine Lost to curiosity An asinine pomposity And I can only watch agleam With inner thoughts of chance redeem ============================================ STINKYLOVE is home!!  Now me morning has its shine back  So my Sy-babers...is this when the moth can say "I told you so?" LOL If you cant "get it back" while on a beach in Cancun? I dont know where one could "asinine pomposity"??? NAH...Randy had just gotten a little too randy LOL Welcome home me Stinky... just look at you--all tanned and rested..and well inspired...love the imagery and wit in this..as well as the humility. Club Med was good for your head   |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome home Sy! Regale us some more with your worlds of explore... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I haven't had very much time to read lately... but what I had was enough to miss you. *S* Welcome back, dear friend... it's great to read your work again... I enjoyed this very much. *S* For Seymour The aggravations of aging, Ponderings of a powerful mind, Dreams left to fulfill and tasks well done - All this, we are likely to find Every time we open a poem That flows from your talented pen And every word you share with us Is worth reading again and again! I think of your talk over ribs that night Meeting you was such a great pleasure! I wait for the time our paths cross once more Seymour, dear, you are a treasure! (But when I think of a blubber pop I start to giggle, can’t seem to stop. *G*) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good Morning Sy!! You have been missed!! Thank you for the wonderful morning read! ~Hugs~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
welcome back maestro and such a return too cool stuff amigo |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Welcome back to the pages of blue, although perhaps Ron could change them to green to match the envy. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart and keeper of the stars incandescent shine, WELCOME HOME, oh how I missed you. I haven’t been in much but I still missed you terribly. Do not reply, as Krissy once did well you should aim better then This reflection of your soul’s thought is one of the best, the very best I’ve ever read by you. You have in this wonderful flow of words written such beauty. In this utterly perfect poem you’ve excelled yourself yet again. This is truly exquisite writing and I love it love it love it utterly. Absolutely gorgeous writing, truly wonderful. x x x a welcome home kiss or three  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Well done with great imagery! |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
This poem is so... so beautiful!!! Neeraja |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Thank you sweet.  JM, Hi sweet, Club Med was not so good for my head. That wanted to do what the twenty year olds were doing. and I was just a wee bit slow. LOL WWRS Sunshine, Nice to be back. Suthern, Great to be back and loved your poetic comment. Enchantress, Thanks for the yippee, glad to be back. Dark Stranger, For a warm place the cool is good. Keth, Your always a lark, glad to be back. Marsha, Thanks for the gorgeous welcome. Sodpossum, Thank you sod. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Neeraja Thanks for the beautiful. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy It's so good to see you! Loved your aquatic butterfly! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Thank you dear. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Seymour, I'm soooooo happy to see you again, sweet friend, I have missed you so so much as I know we all have! (big hugggssssssss) This is delightful, sweet friend, may love always be something your heart revels to, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is a real Florida poem, Sy... I love the tropic lilt you have given it. ~ tropical hugsLyra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Missed you too. and I'm glad to be back. Lyra, Missed you too and glad to read your replies again. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Tell us more Seymour..missed your rhyme and wise eyes galore..Your poem spills of exotic allure. Sincerely, Reg |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
rwood Thank you sweet. |
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