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MomentzBefore
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since 2002-07-22
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0 posted 2002-07-23 01:55 PM


I loved you enough
To give you all that I had
I gave you my love
And even my life
You took my words
My touch
My dreams
My hopes
Trapping them
Making them only your lies
All I wanted was your love
But that's one thing I no longer have

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-07-23 01:57 PM


So sad

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-07-23 03:33 PM




(big hugggsssssss) This is so sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and your loss but I know deep down the most special heavenly love in the world will find you and make you happy forever! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (07-23-2002 03:33 PM).]

BigBlueLu
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 5

3 posted 2002-07-24 02:10 PM


Disclaimer( I BigBlueLu know nothing and do not claim I know anything about anything.  I write this only because this forum has been created to allow free thought.  My thoughts are worth what you paid for them.)

-->Think "LOVE"

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
4 posted 2002-07-24 02:14 PM


I agree with the general consensus, very sad indeed. But nicely written.
sodpossom
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since 2001-06-15
Posts 723
N.C
5 posted 2002-07-24 02:20 PM


Very sad and heart felt!
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