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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-07-23 11:54 AM

Last night...

I  sat  under
a full moon watching it
float across  the  sky,  being
comfortable with your silence.
I  climbed the stars one by one
letting the darkness lift me.  I
thought  about words  and how
they  have  taught  me to
view  the  world  in  a
different light.

A spark arced above, capturing my attention,
traveling smoothly until it faded,
leaving me suspended in time...
remembering when.

The warmest breeze swept over me,
and for a moment, I wondered
if you were watching the night skies, too,
meeting my loneliness halfway.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (07-23-2002 12:07 PM).]

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2002-07-23 12:13 PM

very very well done Maureen.
Was some night out last night yes?
Very inspiring indeed.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-07-23 12:31 PM

Very well done piece of work

Cold hands means a warm heart

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2002-07-23 01:03 PM

WynterGal~
You 'knew' I'd love this one !
You're right !

'I climbed the stars one by one
letting the darkness lift me.'

AND ... love the remembering when~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2002-07-23 04:33 PM

Donna, it was such a clear night...and the moon so bright *s
Thank You
M

the_loner_23 ..thank you for reading, I appreciate your responses
~smiling
M

Marge..yes I knew it and worked on it over and over to at least get some shape out of it...I wanted to write a pleasant poem this day.
Thank you hugssss
M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (07-23-2002 04:35 PM).]

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