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Kevin
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0 posted 2002-07-23 10:01 AM


I borrowed the format for this from the song thats out, I dont know who sings it though : /


I know
She’s not good for me
She sees
Things so selfishly
But she
Comes around when
I’m not strong
And I go wrong
Right into her lap
I know it’s a trap
But I can’t resist
The moments we kissed
The places we’ve been
It’s all happening again

Tell me
Why you got to go and make things so complicated
I see the way your
Trying to play me off again
And get to be frustrated
At times like this, well
You forget
That you let
Someone take
And then break
Up your heart in-
To pieces of
The broken love
That one of two was clearly faking
No no no

I know
He’s not what I need
Why must
Into this we read
Can’t we
Just enjoy this
While it lasts
Forget the past
Mistakes that we made
The games that we played
We still will be friends
After all this ends
We’re so far apart
I’m not looking for your heart

Tell me
Why you got to go and make things so complicated
You’re over ana-
Lyzing what this means to me
Its gets to be frustrating
Life’s like this, well
You have fun
With someone
While you wait
For your fate
To slowly unwind
Just promise me
That you won’t leave
Your heart out
It’ll end up breaking
No no no

[This message has been edited by Kevin (07-23-2002 10:35 AM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-23 12:27 PM


Very good write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-08-02 03:01 PM


Cool write! I liked it. And the artist is Avril Lavigne.

~sky

You look inside my wild mind
never knowing what you'll find
still I want you all the time
yeah I do
'cause you get me
~Michelle Branch

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