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CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-07-23 05:53 AM

Spring waterfall
Refreshingly vibrant
Forever falling
No waterfall has fallen
Endlessly as I for you

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2002-07-23 06:11 AM

very stunning write, and the graphics are lovely. Well penned CSK.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2002-07-23 08:30 AM

CSK...lovely display of the art
and the condition

enjoyed this

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-07-23 09:11 AM

Very very nicely done!!
I appreciate this..
Tanka very much!
~Hugs~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2002-07-23 09:42 AM

AlohaSweetLady~
SO GOOD to see you !
I hope you are doing just wonderfully~
Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

5 posted 2002-07-23 01:32 PM

Thank you all for your time and feedback. It is a delight to me that you enjoyed.

Soooooo Marge you recognized me with my disguise..LOL....I say:

pretty smart lady
catching old poet; new name
detective Tindal

good to see you too!

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

6 posted 2002-07-23 08:50 PM

Cheryl,
what a clever last line! adds another dimension to your tanka...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-07-23 08:54 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is beautiful, I love it, this flows gently like a waterfall across the page, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, trhank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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