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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-07-23 05:53 AM






Spring waterfall
Refreshingly vibrant
Forever falling
No waterfall has fallen
Endlessly as I for you

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2002-07-23 06:11 AM


very stunning write, and the graphics are lovely.  Well penned CSK.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


Dark Stranger
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West Coast
2 posted 2002-07-23 08:30 AM


CSK...lovely display of the art
and the condition

enjoyed this

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-07-23 09:11 AM


Very very nicely done!!
I appreciate this..
Tanka very much!
~Hugs~

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2002-07-23 09:42 AM


AlohaSweetLady~
SO GOOD to see you !
I hope you are doing just wonderfully~
Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
5 posted 2002-07-23 01:32 PM


Thank you all for your time and feedback. It is a delight to me that you enjoyed.

Soooooo Marge you recognized me with my disguise..LOL....I say:

pretty smart lady
catching old poet; new name
detective Tindal

good to see you too!

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

kaile
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6 posted 2002-07-23 08:50 PM


Cheryl,
what a clever last line! adds another dimension to your tanka...


Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2002-07-23 08:54 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is beautiful, I love it, this flows gently like a waterfall across the page, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, trhank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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