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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
She has a desire to breathe, again backing her boldness freedom, comes at the oddest exchange, what was that conversion rate, again and would you please stop speaking in Celsius it’s so confusing and speaking of speaking promise me, best that you can we’ll talk like this for as long as we have stories for as long as we fill the silences with a dream a poem a figment a kiss for as long as it is good and I’ll promise you, best that I can to love you everyday please don't change, please don't break |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Duncan-- May I say this? about that? The romance in your words is very warm and getting warmer temperature steadily rising Takes the breath away Leaving me speechless... Shenachie |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and speaking of speaking promise me, best that you can we'll talk like this for as long as we have stories for as long as we fill the silences with a dream a poem a figment a kiss for as long as it is good and I'll promise you, best that I can to love you everyday ================================== ...speaking of heart on sleeve and sincerety  *smiling at you* ... (and your new sig) very very cool write D ... have missed reading your words  who knew a long winded moth would crave distilled Duncan *L* mothyme How she loves me, I dont understand |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
The exchange rate is quite easy Two heartbeats equal love Two dreams will equal one As stars shine from above Tell me all your stories Then we’ll make some of our own It’s in our dreams and promises That seeds of love are sown I hear you through the silence The dream I share with you The exchange rate is quite easy Just one love shared by two  |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
This is good!! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hey.......did ya tatoo that on your arm? Very cool Duncan man.......that should earn ya some points and also let her know that you mean business in this relationship. Nice to see ya in here with smiles. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I'm melting...even though it's not meant for me...sigh Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
So sweet Cold hands means a warm heart |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Duncan you sound more like Rod McKuen every day (this is a compliment lol) Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes..you do write like Rod McKuen...in a good way! Wow...this is wonderful... and forget the Celcius thing... Usually they give it to you in both up here anyway. You have been missed!! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and speaking of speaking promise me, best that you can we’ll talk like this for as long as we have stories ~*~ clink Here's to Scheherazade... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Duncan This is so natural and honest...just words flowing from a true feeling. I like that!  |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Duncan, the ending has such a finality to it that i almost blurted, "Amen" in response...enjoyed the read... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Duncan, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, yes, despite the Celsius and Fahrenheit complications, love is always what matters and the special thing that will always be shard in common! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Simply stated and speaking of speaking promise me, best that you can we’ll talk like this for as long as we have stories Simply beautiful writing, Duncan ~ speaking hugsLyra |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
umm..yes..DUH ME! I read this to someone wonderful last night, and he loved it too. Geesh...wonder where he is anyways. I loved this. I meant to reply to it last night, but I was a bit distracted by the mood it put me in whilst talking to my beloved.  Lovely writing, Duncan. I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Duncan....you speak very well..... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, You dunked in your thumb and pulled out a plum. Great write. |
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