Open Poetry #21 |
The Twilight Hour |
ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
The suns light has descended, beyond the horizons of joy. Twilight where neither sun nor moon, sheds light upon the heart. Such is the hour of Grace, when Faith illuminates the dark corners of the soul. Old lies and outworn beliefs are seen for what they are. Dying their death fertilizing soil, where new hope blossoms. Love's fragrance permiates life's hour. Twilight where Faith is the rose of eternal light. A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Ellie, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, the beauty of faith fills your words and shines like the rose you describe! (kiss on cheek) You are a true delight to us all, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ellie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
lovely poem - very well written - enjoyed it so much - thanks Paul |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
For those that know......that moment when the heart's acceptance becomes louder and stronger than the voices of doubt in the mind, is the most beautiful and intense moment one could experience. There is no mistaking that you KNOW this enlightment as you describe it more beautifully and completely than I have ever read. Excellent write and a true blessing to read. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (07-22-2002 09:14 PM).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sorry for the quick come back....but want to save this one for my library. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Mom, this is exceptional. You have written this so beautifully!! I hope this receives the attention it deserves. Love you, Beth What is past is prologue; |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Ellie, This is a lovely message and comparision of the physical and the Spiritual, which I have never thjought quite like that but is seems quite appropriate. A specail message, from a Special person displaying Special insight, used to share and to bless others. Bless You too, david |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Love's fragrance permiates life's hour. Twilight where Faith is the rose of eternal light. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Your gift for writing really shines in this lovely poem. Hugs, Deb |
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