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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Moments in a moment of tenderness he touched a tear |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Helen, Seems like a healing hand to me. Nice thought.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
how long is a moment?? four lines. . . love it helen. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love this thought Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Sweet Helen, I love the simple thought you have turned into a heart-warming piece. Sigh...I miss reading you. I guess I'll have to stop in more often!  Kris A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms slick you do it with one touch well done ms |
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MomentzBefore Junior Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 31 |
Short but very meaningful..... |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Tender! There is much beauty in simplicity.You captured it. SimplyGold |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
beautiful - poignant - just loved this - you touch much here! Paul |
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