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Open Poetry #21

Just Don't Tell Me That

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-07-21 02:01 PM

He says he told you he was gonna be gone 2 weeks in a letter
You read it
And in no place does it
Give that info

But he swears he told you
She is like yeah right
What a lie
You moron

He should know she hates being lied to
That one day she will say their threw
But she keeps on taking it
But she just keeps saying,
"Just don't tell me that."

Cold hands means a warm heart

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

1 posted 2002-07-21 03:08 PM

I thought this poem was kinda funny...
"She is like yeah right
What a lie
You moron"
...but very good.
Keep writing!

({SarA})

“And I know what you want/And I know what you feel/As I cradle your loving/And watch you disappear/And I feel your heart beat/Pounding in my head/I'd

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-07-21 07:10 PM

(smiles) Wow, I love the cleverly sarcastic and feisty tone in this, LOL! (big hugggssssss) You always express a fine wide array of emotions, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

3 posted 2002-07-21 07:48 PM

I don't know what to say about this. It's that good.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

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