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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
A Cup of Tea It is a long day's work Where is the moon To soothe this tired soul Sun do not come too soon Spinning without control Turning around to late to see The graying of the hair Somehow appeared when I was not there The lines of time have no mercy They do not spare even the closest of friends The pace is set and we burn from inside It is all much to fast, this struggle to survive Leaves me wondering if the exchange was fair Perhaps, it would have been more nourshing to hunt for berries, chop for wood and trade with the doctor for some eggs and a cup of tea c2002SimplyGold |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well and here you ask that I not come too soon and here I am...Welcome to Passions! We've been told that you would stop by! Please, check your e-mail for a special greeting! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (07-21-2002 11:29 AM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
SimplyGold Your poem left me wondering too. Enjoyed this first post very much...Welcome to Passions!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! I thoroughly enjoyed your first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, this is such a wonderful debut, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssss) Lyra has told us so much about you and we are all so happy you are here with us all, YAY!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet SimplyGold, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Welcome to passions! This is a beautiful poem. [This message has been edited by SmartChick (07-21-2002 12:15 PM).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to our family! I always say my hair isn't gray, it's blond! I enjoyed your first poem and look forward to more from you.  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome to Passions....very nice first post! Great to have you here! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
welcome to passions...helen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Interesting write, I think of those things often. Welcome. Sandra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Spinning without control Turning around to late to see The graying of the hair Somehow appeared when I was not there I love your portrayal of aging here, Electra. I have hunted for words to express exactly what you have written so very beautifully in this poem. Welcome to Passions, Electra...and I am so proud to have you as one of my Passions sisters.  ~ great big welcoming hugs Lyra |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome poem. Welcome to Passions! Cold hands means a warm heart |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Thank you for your comments. It means alot to me. SimplyGold |
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