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Niksta
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since 2001-11-09
Posts 6
Australia

0 posted 2002-07-21 12:51 PM



I have this silly feeling,
It just wont go away,
I want to be with this guy,
There's just so much to say.

I think about him always,
He's always on my mind,
But I feel like I'm not worth it,
I'm just not one of his kind.

He acts like nothings happened,
He has nothing to say,
He goes about his own ways,
To him it was just another day.

For me it was something more,
A piece of me is now gone,
He's taken it away somewhere,
Discarded it, & he's reborn.

It's like it meant nothing,
"Ahh.. thanks for coming tonight.."
But what am I to do now?
Can't I stay the night?

I was pushed away for good,
He's crossed me off the list,
I shouldn't have take it so far,
I should've ended it when we kissed.

I can't believe this feeling,
The emptiness & heartache,
What I thought was special,
Turned out to be completely fake.

© Copyright 2002 Niksta - All Rights Reserved
Night_Myst
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since 2000-08-16
Posts 34
River Falls, WI
1 posted 2002-07-21 01:40 AM


I like this piece, it's open and honest.  I can relate to this piece on a certain level, but I don't think that a personal experience is necessary to understand it.  Keep your chin up and remember to smile.
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-07-21 07:55 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Niksta, I understand how you feel, sweet friend, there is a girl I love so so much, Joanna, and I just want to ake her the happiest girl she can be and I always wonder if she thinks of me the same way as before! (sigh) This is wonderfully honest, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Niksta, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2002-07-21 08:02 PM


Very sad

Cold hands means a warm heart

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2002-07-25 04:51 AM


Now what?  
Go for the one's that are sincerely interested in you...take your time to find the right one...what do I know?  James

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