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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-07-20 12:38 PM

I see in your eyes
The love you once gave to me
With no conditions

By Sue 7-19-02

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2002-07-20 02:42 AM

Unconditional love is the only kind of real love there is. Enjoyed your heartfelt words smart lady~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-07-20 07:08 AM

SmartChick, Paladin is sure to smile! I know, because I did...

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

3 posted 2002-07-20 07:26 AM

"once gave"? interesting thought...but what about the present or the future?? wondered briefly about that when i read this senryu..

keep writing!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-07-20 08:43 AM

Very well done!
I know Paladin is smiling...
he loves these as much as I do!
~Hugs, Nancy~

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

5 posted 2002-07-20 09:10 AM

Love is given to us so that we may return it.
Never stop giving love, because it truly is a gift that always comes back to us.

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

6 posted 2002-07-20 09:16 AM

Paul,
very wise words here..you should turn your reply into a senryu!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2002-07-20 09:49 AM

SuzieQ~
This is WONDERFUL !
Look at you grow in your poetic thoughts~
Sending big HUGS~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

8 posted 2002-07-20 01:27 PM

Unconditioal love never passes.I may not show it's self all the time but it is always there.Thank you by honoring me with this senyru.It was very well written.

paladin

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2002-07-20 01:33 PM

Lovely.
Sandra

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-07-20 02:02 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, such love shines from your heart here as I know Robert is going to love this! (big hugggssssss) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

11 posted 2002-07-20 02:22 PM

Like it a lot!!!!

Charisma

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