Open Poetry #21 |
Melt Into Us |
Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I feel your tears against my heart And wrap your body soft Now drain your shape, become my own Leave pain to wander off A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Sad yet beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
+ = Sincerely, Titus As I'm out there, walking, searching, for myself, for you.... won't you join me? Let's walk this journey together. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
a very good one a 4line picturemagic BS. I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kris, this is some exceptional imagery... thank you... |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Kris... Very good. I hope all your tears turn to tears of joy. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Kristopher, this is sooooo compassionately beautiful, sweet friend, may you together always kiss each others tears away and make everything OK! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
short and sweet. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love it!!! Charisma |
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