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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2002-07-19 10:44 AM

Slowly years go by
Whether we
You are not knowing about
How long It has to been?
Looking at the roses
So slowly roses fades too
Without
knowing
how much you care
for the love you had
Now even The roses fading quickly
Under the sunlight
Whether the time
Is not right or wrong?
To know what Is there
In store for you
Yes,
Even the rose faded
quickly too
When the days and the nights went by
Winter came
Then even summer came by
knowing that
It will
all the seasons we had
Will go by quickly
Slowly the roses
Which I watch them to grow
Now they are slowly fading quickly
I had loved them
Like I loved you

[This message has been edited by vandana (07-19-2002 12:24 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-07-19 10:48 AM

Speechless!!!!

Cold hands means a warm heart

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-07-19 10:53 AM

vandana,
this is great emotion but spoiled a little by the errors, a quick edit would improve it so much.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2002-07-19 04:40 PM

why?

wonderful my friend. . .

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Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

4 posted 2002-07-19 04:51 PM

Here is hoping that the roses in your life find their way to many more blooms to come. A very emotional poem filled with many thoughts. You present them well and I don't find a language barrier in these words at all. Just beautifully and clearly stated.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-07-19 08:15 PM

(big hugggggssssss) Oh Vandana, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope now many more roses and flowers bloom in your heart with loves true bliss, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-07-19 08:57 PM

Vandana, I enjoyed the read so much!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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