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Wind Chimes (Duet with ThisDiamond)
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Wind Chimes (Duet with ThisDiamond) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Wind Chimes Alone upon a sandy shore, in wait of one as beacon calls Alone upon a raging sea, a tear of sadness slowly falls To find the love of the heart, to feel the love of the soul To climb the mount yet apart, as bells below softly toll You are not alone my love, our thoughts speak language dear You are not alone my love, this image ever near The best that I can give to you, the freedom to depart To climb majestic peaks your own, and follow of your heart A trek across an arid land, a land of shifting dunes of time A trek to touch one soft hand, to whisper words of lover's rhyme The stars at night share the gleam and bring to eyes the tears One love of heart of yet it seems to conquer all, arrest the fears As you walk, beside am I, the hourglass and sands As you walk, beside am I, at every turn of hands The way is long to journey on, yet every light we share One mind and soul to conquer all, in love I'm always there Fear not my maid of heart and soul, of beauty beyond compare Your love, mine heart does hold, forever kept within there. I love thee now as from the mome' whence eyes did 'pon thee gaze And shall I live to say thee are, I will, I will... for all my days. You are not alone my love, kept softly in my heart You are not alone my love, although we are apart So deeply shines your light inside, no star a brighter be To comfort as the wing will soar, my love remains with thee [This message has been edited by Magnus (07-18-2002 07:58 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I came in to see how the chimes would swing and instead I heard of hearts that sing... well done, the two of you...very, very nice! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kathy, Thank you very much for the pleasure of writing this with you....You are a very talented poetess.... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
In humble bow to you my Lord...happy to write in tune. Thank You Barry. ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Barry and Kathleen, you two make such a wonderful team, sweet friends, you explore the sensitive side of loves faith even through loss and the promise of eternal friendship, this is lovely, we all love you both so much, kudos to you both! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Barry and Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Barry and Kathy - what a beautiful duet - just a wonderful poem - wonderful images of love and loving - I just loved it - Paul |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You two are fantastic!!!! I do hope we will see more duets from the two of you. This is so wonderfully romantic! Awesome!! ~Hugs to you both~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
I really like this duet a lot...soft, gentle and sweet. mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sun, I kept thinking that with Kathy's style....we could write well together... Me thinks I was right.... Thank you... Thanx Noah, yes...this was most enjoyable.. and I am certain she and I will do this again. Paul...that was the theme I was trying to bring out, and between the two of us...we did just fine...thank you... Nancy...thanx M'lady....NOW...when are we going to try and write another one...maybe get better than the last one we did...if that is possible... hugs... Mycafe...love the name...and thanx much for your comments.... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kathy, this is as much your own as it is mine....Please feel free to put in your library.... Thanx much for a most enjoyable write... |
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