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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-07-18 07:58 PM


Wind Chimes

Alone upon a sandy shore, in wait of one as beacon calls
Alone upon a raging sea, a tear of sadness slowly falls
To find the love of the heart, to feel the love of the soul
To climb the mount yet apart, as bells below softly toll

You are not alone my love, our thoughts speak language dear
You are not alone my love, this image ever near
The best that I can give to you, the freedom to depart
To climb majestic peaks your own, and follow of your heart

A trek across an arid land, a land of shifting dunes of time
A trek to touch one soft hand, to whisper words of lover's rhyme
The stars at night share the gleam and bring to eyes the tears
One love of heart of yet it seems to conquer all, arrest the fears

As you walk, beside am I, the hourglass and sands
As you walk, beside am I, at every turn of hands
The way is long to journey on, yet every light we share
One mind and soul to conquer all, in love I'm always there

Fear not my maid of heart and soul, of beauty beyond compare
Your love, mine heart does hold, forever kept within there.
I love thee now as from the mome' whence eyes did 'pon thee gaze
And shall I live to say thee are, I will, I will... for all my days.

You are not alone my love, kept softly in my heart
You are not alone my love, although we are apart
So deeply shines your light inside, no star a brighter be
To comfort as the wing will soar, my love remains with thee


[This message has been edited by Magnus (07-18-2002 07:58 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-07-18 08:04 PM



I came in to see how the chimes would swing
and instead I heard of hearts that sing...

well done, the two of you...very, very nice!

Magnus
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2 posted 2002-07-18 08:05 PM


Kathy,

Thank you very much for the pleasure of
writing this with you....You are a very
talented poetess....

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3 posted 2002-07-18 08:12 PM


In humble bow to you my Lord...happy to write in tune. Thank You Barry. ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2002-07-18 08:14 PM




(smiles) Oh Barry and Kathleen, you two make such a wonderful team, sweet friends, you explore the sensitive side of loves faith even through loss and the promise of eternal friendship, this is lovely, we all love you both so much, kudos to you both! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Barry and Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-07-18 08:19 PM


Barry and Kathy - what a beautiful duet - just a wonderful poem - wonderful images of love and loving - I just loved it - Paul
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6 posted 2002-07-18 08:20 PM


You two are fantastic!!!!
I do hope we will see more duets from the two of you.
This is so wonderfully romantic!
Awesome!!
~Hugs to you both~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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7 posted 2002-07-18 08:56 PM


I really like this duet a lot...soft, gentle and sweet.

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

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8 posted 2002-07-18 09:29 PM


Sun,  I kept thinking that with Kathy's
style....we could write well together...
Me thinks I was right....  Thank you...

Thanx Noah,  yes...this was most enjoyable..
and I am certain she and I will do this again.  

Paul...that was the theme I was trying to
bring out,  and between the two of us...we
did just fine...thank you...

Nancy...thanx M'lady....NOW...when are we
going to try and write another one...maybe
get better than the last one we did...if
that is possible...  hugs...

Mycafe...love the name...and thanx much for
your comments....

Magnus
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9 posted 2002-07-18 09:38 PM


Kathy,  this is as much your own as it is mine....Please feel free to put in your library....

Thanx much for a most enjoyable write...

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