Open Poetry #21 |
Then Came the Rain |
elfin_tigress Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 101Someplace |
Then Came the Rain One night, I dreamed That a butterfly chased me Hunting me for sport. That night, I dreamed I was alone in a forest A princess without a home. One night, I dreamed That alone in the woods I was locked away In a tall dark tower. That night, I dreamed Torns rose to my feet And I cried. Then came the rain. One night, I dreamed That I could fly But then I would fall. That night, I dreamed I woke up hot and thirsty Far away from home. One night, I dreamed That I wandered Through the desert That night, I dreamed That the sun and the moon Begged me to live And I tried. Then came the rain. One night, I dreamed I was a general Leading an army In a battle to lose. That night, I dreamed My soldiers lay helpless At the enemy’s feet. One night, I dreamed I would give up my land To wet dead tongues. That night, I dreamed Men screamed for me To let them drink Or all would die. Then came the rain. One night, I dreamed I fell in love With one I knew forever. That night, I dreamed I warmed his heart too much. We were afraid. One night, I dreamed That he was burning And I could do nothing. That night, I dreamed That I wept forever. I thought I wept in vain, And I cried. Then came the rain. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so sad. Enjoyed! Cold hands means a warm heart |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Oh my god, this poem is so sad and so wonderful; The tale it tells has such great imagery, I loved it . L.of.L. Tom . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
This was a wonferful but sad poem. Juanita |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a very beautiful poem - full of many emotions and things to ponder and things to see - I liked it very much - Paul |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
(((warm hugs)))......so sad but incredible penned..... Charisma |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
this is very, very good. definitely raw... i like how each dream is a muted memory. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) This is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you, I have these thoughts too sometimes but I know with all my heart these visions will pass and true love is destined to come to you always! (sigh) My thoughs are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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