Open Poetry #21 |
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slow land ( Serenity challenge) |
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woodtic Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 87 |
Wages earned in hours spent on days built into weeks month end and start again the years go on in streaks. I watch them slowly. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Five lines. Just five lines? and you just described 17 years of my father's "too-short life. INCREDIBLE. I like it much. I am always fascinated by a brevity of word, with images so sharp, but I'll stop now, grin, before I do some of that "accidental" irony! ![]() Again, I'm loving the read. |
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woodtic Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 87 |
I'm hoping that your father sipped his hasty years in a long and lingering way. Found some time or dug it up and blessed you with it's ray. |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Great one, woodtic! (and with a name like that, you can only be from the mountains or New England ![]() Like me. ![]() She said burn ... together. |
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