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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York 
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I walk upstairs through some clouds white gates I see before a door I knock upon this pearly white door Lookie here at what I see its peace and harmony nothing more will make me wait to pass through these pearly gates I walk along, the clouds again to speak to one they call my lord I take the tour of his land Lookie here at what I see a shopping mall up in the sky a million angels flutter by a hotel to the left a park to the right a billion houses and a rain machine angels looking downward from the sky to the world they used to know prayers can be heard from all around |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is precious, Kellie... I especially love the shopping mall in the sky....any shopping mall is my idea of heaven. Do they have an ethereal parking lot for cars with wings? LOL  ~ heavenly hugsLyra copyright2002 Lyra Nesius "poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks [This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (07-18-2002 12:56 AM).] |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Lyra- Thanks. I never saw any cars when I took that tour. Hmm I'll check next time okay!! |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
aghh malls suck! pleasant speculations though |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
ohhh good there you are, we were worried, did you see the message in announcements....your MOM left a message for you there.... love the poem...  good to see you are OK!Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (07-18-2002 11:10 AM).] |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Its ok I went to youth group over night with out permission. wont do it again |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh kellie, we have all missed you so much, sweet friend, I'm so glad you are OK, this is a wonderfully upbeat piece with wonderful angelic themes! (sigh) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kellie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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thejingler Junior Member
since 2002-07-21
Posts 15NC |
The jingler has read with much delight your idea of heaven. A subject to which he is quite devoted. A rain machine? |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Rain has to come from somewhere... it doesn't just come from thin air..(science isn't right) |
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