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GOlDsparklESS
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since 2001-12-13
Posts 428
central nj
0 posted 2002-06-13 04:16 PM

languid daydreams
spark

rememberence of days when
self conscious turned into
consciously self

imposing then
superimposing
lightly stained like
pastel

one sloughed away
is opulence
adjacent parameters display
reservoirs of stranded paradise

dawning dispersion....
© Copyright 2002 Manisha Narang - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-06-13 04:26 PM

I like this piece very much

Cold hands means a warm heart
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2002-06-13 07:53 PM

I think I get this one....interesting write!
EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
3 posted 2002-07-06 02:24 AM

hmm. really gotta think about this one. aw man i dont feel like thinking. oh well. nonetheless this is displayment of inherited frailty at its finest
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