Open Poetry #21 |
Slow Man's Land (challenge) |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I was always considered slow I have a learning disability But so There are so many like me out there But we get along And some people are fair But not only learning disabilites Make people slow Sometimes it is caused by sickness And even old age So this whole world can be considered A slow man's land Whether people like it or not Not just people with learning disabilites like me Are slow as can be In this slow man's land Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Julie, this is so very truie, sweet friend, I have alearning difference also but there is nothing wrong with it for we are all unique in our own ways and we should respect those differences! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderfully heartfelt, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much, loner... I don't think I'd ever appreciated how fast the world moves or how hard it is to move slowly until I had a concussion... It would take two cycles of the traffic light for me to cross the street... and it's scary out there in the middle. *S* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This little snapshot of the phrase, is by NO MEAN..."slow"... exceptional, sincere and insightful, loner lady. You touched m'heart! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Loner, you did this challenge proud! ~wranx I have great faith in Humanity...It's just most of the Humans, I'm not too keen on. E.F.Rose |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Great one, Loner. My brother has a learning disability, too, and I know how frustrating it can be to never break over the mental wall erected in th' mind. Thanks for sharin' this! She said burn ... together. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You know I think everyone has a disability of some sort...everyone is slower at something... but with learning disabilities there are coping skills and obviously you have met that challenge ~Smiles M |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
*smiles* I agree with Maureen, Julie.... Sometimes our disabilities give us coping skills that no one else has... and you probably have developed special strengths to make up for your disability... like the way blind people can actually "feel" colors, and deaf people can hear things through vibrations. ~ very special hugs for a very special young woman Lyra |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Very good write Julie!!! And there is nothing wrong with being slow... I wish more people would slow down a bit! Neeraja |
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