»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #21
»
Little Nails
| Open Poetry #21 |
|
Little Nails |
|
|
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Little betrayals like little nails hammered into my heart. Small lies as love dies in the quiet before the dawn. It isnt always an earthquake that sends cracks through loves foundation. Sometimes its just one too many late nights left alone in the dark. Sometimes its as simple as a word left unsaid a touch not given. Little betrayals like little nails Like little nails. |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Paula, welcome home. Once again, you've taken a pain and nailed it home... I have missed your writing... please, stay awhile... |
||
Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Paula, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I hpe this is not related to a real-life experience currently, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I wish for love to always be true and caring to your golden heart, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paula, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
|
wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I have personally killed love in this fashion. Learned too late. Thanks for your honest piece ~wranx I have great faith in Humanity...It's just most of the Humans, I'm not too keen on. E.F.Rose |
||
|
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
little betrayals like little nails what a wonderful couplet! Great to see ya, Paula!  |
||
|
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hi there Paula....missed ya.....hard to sleep on those little nails isn't it? Wonderful metaphor.....wonderful poem! |
||
|
EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
As always Paula, one cannot help but feel your words, well done! Take care. Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller |
||
|
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello my twin... Yes, you said so much here, and all too true. It's the little 'left undone' things that nail the wall up between two people. The forgotten hugs, little kisses for no reason, and the simple things that don't cost a penny, but add so much to our lives. Paula, it's so very good to be able to read your work again...I missed you...  Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! |
||
|
BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Painfully true. Hugs, Deb |
||
|
Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Wow Paula...this is exceptional!!!!!!!! |
||
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
So much truth... so well written. *S* I like this very much! |
||
|
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Paula, welcome back I hope you aren't made frail stabbed by those littel nails good writing Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
