Open Poetry #21 |
If I were a Star |
TeaBag Junior Member
since 2002-06-13
Posts 10Land of Love |
If I were a Star If I were a star, I would twinkle from afar. It would be very bright To give the world some light. To help the whole world out And be there without a doubt. Give the world a hand And be a better man. Bright and shining I will be To help the world be cheery. If I were a star, You know I wouldn’t be very far! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
giving the world a hand..not such a bad thought *s M |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
What a beautiful soul have you To wish the world a brighter hue Sharing your light For a better view Nice write! Thank for brightening my day and Welcome! |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
You aspire well here. What generous thoughts. Welcome to Passions... good write. Love, Light and Peace, Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. [This message has been edited by Magicmystery (06-13-2002 03:29 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! Much enjoyed your first post! I look forward to more of your work. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to Passions. I look forward to more of your work Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting...and even a man or woman have the power to give light and hope in this world...James |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I can tell you a bit about trying to be a star..I mean on a film set, or on stage...can't help you in the celestial department although I glow from within sometimes. Your pseudonym inspired a short rhyme, a dedication to you for your visit here..please continue to glow and write [This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-13-2002 04:17 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice thoughts. Welcome. Sandra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
To help the whole world out And be there without a doubt. And we sure could use some help now, too... Welcome to Passions, Teabag... I hope you enjoy it here as much as I have. ~ welcoming hugs Lyra |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
Welcome to Passions What a great introduction you've made =) Tai |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Welcome to Passions. Awesome first poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
This poem if very good. hope to see more here. There's a peace inside us all |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And I would be pleased to have a star of such caring... Welcome to Passions..Enjoy yourself.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! Awwww, and you are a true shining star to us all who I know has so much love and inspiration to share with us all, this debut lights like the brighest star! I LOVE IT!!! HAPPY FATHERS DAY!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A very optimistic write for a highly optimistic site...Welcome to Passions! Please check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions enjoy |
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TeaBag Junior Member
since 2002-06-13
Posts 10Land of Love |
Wow! I didnt expect to get a wonderful greating like this, but thank you all!! You have truly made me feel welcome and I will work on some more poetry to write. I have a bit of writers block.. but I will be posting more. I am glad that everyone enjoyed my poem, as I enjoyed writing it. Thank you sunshine for the email, I got it today.. as I have been away from my computer for a bit. Thanks to all for your sweet words once again.. -T |
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