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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-07-15 09:01 PM


My love flows like a river
How he fills my inner being
Before he came into my life
There was no love that I was seeing

My love engages my heart
How I yearn for his caress
He puts me upon a pedestal
And treats me like a princess

My love showers me with kisses
His heart plays in perfect tune
On more than one occasion
His love transports me to the moon

My love has given me confidence
With him I can be myself
And to think after all this time
I thought I'd be left upon the shelf

My love accepts me as I am
He says he wouldn't change a thing
He's given my life new meaning
So much joy does his love bring

My love continues to bloom
For him I will always be there
As my words express my feelings
And show him how much I care

My love has no boundaries
For it goes deeper than the sea
So many hours of pleasure
Your love has afforded me

To you I'll always be indebted
For you've made my spirit soar
So much your love has taught me
I have so much to be grateful for

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386
Ohio, USA
1 posted 2002-07-15 09:10 PM


this is a very powerful Ode to the power of love - such fine poetry - such vivid and touching images - thanks Sue for a great read - Paul
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2 posted 2002-07-15 09:41 PM


"To you I'll always be indebted
For you've made my spirit soar
So much your love has taught me
I have so much to be grateful for"




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may your love always make your spirits soar and fill you with confidence and happiness that is so special to your heart forever! (kiss on cheek) This is absolutely beautiful, sweet friend, YAY, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2002-07-16 05:16 AM


All you need is love...love is all you need...James
BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
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Florida
4 posted 2002-07-16 07:51 AM


How sweet it is! Love like that is hard to find. Great poem!

Deb

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04
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A Mountain Paradise
5 posted 2002-07-16 08:06 AM


Hey Sue - You've got this love thing down to a science girlfriend. Your hubby is very fortunate to have someone like you and vice versa.

...'My love accepts me as I am
He says he wouldn't change a thing
He's given my life new meaning
So much joy does his love bring...'

In my opinion, the above lines are truly what love, respect and caring for one another are all about. You did a great job on this poem.  Hugs, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain."

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