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Open Poetry #21

Love at First Sight

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-07-15 05:09 PM

Love at first sight
When I talked to him first
It was like his personality was just right

Love at first sight
His looks were jusy right
He may not be perfect
But I don't expect perfection
If he is caring not hurtful
Then he is just right for me

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

1 posted 2002-07-15 05:11 PM

The whole poem describes my feelings the day we met.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-07-15 06:21 PM

Goldilocks,
sometimes things are Juuuust Right.

Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

3 posted 2002-07-15 07:59 PM

Nice deal, Julie....
the same way as it was when I met my husband, David...
Love at first sight for both of us.

~ hugs from the heart

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-07-15 10:14 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your love forever fill you with confidence and be caring to your heart and always make you happy! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light awlays shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2002-07-15 10:45 PM

I think Keth was trying to be subtle about the word just..a typo I am sure (some of us have built in spell checks...for those who don't, there is always the edit button)

....but a nice feel to your words
*s

M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (07-15-2002 10:46 PM).]

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