Open Poetry #21 |
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Burnt |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA ![]() |
I am burnt Look at how red I am Oh man Don't touch me I look like a lobster Where is the aloe? I am in pain I can't sit I can't sleep All I feel is that I am burnt Cold hands means a warm heart |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
while the feeling of hurt stings, i'm sure most of us will be willing to apply aloe(i learnt a new word today ![]() brace up! keep writing! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Been there! Deb |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
I get a sunburn on Monday and by Wednesday it's turned into a tan. I must be strong against fire or something. LOL What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Whoa...your supposed to have someone rub suntan lotion on your back before you get burned...I see lots of burned one's over here down in Waikiki...I have found the best way to avoid burning is to keep rolling over...so I can see the women on this side and then that side and then back to the other side...I hate it when you get burned and the itching sets in...simply miserable...James |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Sorry about the burn, Julie... You look like you have very fair skin. I have never gotten a sunburn because my ancestors wandered in the desert fo 40 years and I ended up with dark skin... Aloe is the best though, it even works on kitchen burns. ![]() Lyra |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (big hugggssssssss) Oh Julie, I'm sorry you got burnt, sweet friend, I know how you feel for it is so dry out here and I get burnt quite a lot too! (sigh) I do agree with Lyra, aloe vera works very well, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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