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Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

0 posted 2002-07-15 07:34 AM

The little girl was dressed

in a shrouded mist of sadness

while she walked the path

of million tears

her eyes wide open

not realizing…

what she lost

a life ago…

when the war

killed her childhood…

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

1 posted 2002-07-15 10:01 AM

This is so sad.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-07-15 10:12 AM

Neeraja...there is a story here.
We are listening.

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

3 posted 2002-07-15 10:33 AM

WOW Neeraja! You have said tons with only a very few words. Is there more?

Hugs, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain."

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

4 posted 2002-07-15 11:15 AM

powerful powerful words here Neeraja - well wrttien poem and very deep pondering and feelings to go with it - thanks - Paul

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

5 posted 2002-07-15 12:28 PM

This is amazing, and quite powerful. Good write.

written in blood before everything went black

JCV

LisaLongLegs
New Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 8

6 posted 2002-07-15 01:18 PM

Wow, very powerful and said in so little words!

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

7 posted 2002-07-15 01:22 PM

Beyond sad, Neeraja....

~ hugs and tears

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-07-15 06:45 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Neeraja, this is so very sad, sweet friend, it breaks my heart to see so many afflicted by wars sights and my heart goes out to all these veterans who suffered these times when they were young! (sad sigh) This is sad but compassionately touching, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

9 posted 2002-07-19 02:48 PM

Thanks again for all your comments!!!

I love you all!!!

Neeraja

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