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Open Poetry #21

Treasure

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-07-15 07:28 AM

Treasure

sirensun
enters the water
where diamonds
glisten
in day
sensual caressing
to waters surface
it falls
gently
in the bay
sinking
to the bottom
gems crush
by the pressure
of the tide
and slides
to the shore
forming grains
of sand
where you sit
by my side

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2002-07-15 07:50 AM

Lovely Helen. I love the sea and with I could be near it more often. Your visions take me there.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2002-07-15 08:12 AM

Crushed gems?

Topaz and emeralds
Rubies once held
Crushed to a rainbow
A glistening of sand
Lost in the washing
Scattered rinsing
Had to let them go
Rushing from our hand

just a brief thought,
Enjoyed your poem

Gloom

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

3 posted 2002-07-24 11:34 PM

helen,
lovely whimiscal read..it does seem like there are plenty of diamonds out there on the seas huh?

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2002-07-24 11:36 PM

This is very nice. I like it.

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

5 posted 2002-07-24 11:55 PM

sigh.....why are all the stars out of reach?!
Very nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kris

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

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