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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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what song from cellophane mouth is this shuddering moment in plain transparent this crescendo of euphony voiceless shouted in funnel gap scream is it but the sigh songs from my dream eyes glued in tight lipped squint til dawn do you bring laughter in buckets to wash me awake then to view your femininity ajar lest I wear you only as dead man vision ©dark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-15-2002 07:43 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Always, one must read with two minds... that of the reader... and that of the insightful... you blend your words well with imagery... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
There follows more life than eyes can feed the heart You shall be a book then..when I read and try to discern what smiles you give me. Sincerely, Reg |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sigh songs.. from my lips for yours to hear Dark one listen come stand near... I didn't say that darn close!!! *wink* Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunshine.. good morning from the oven of calif... iced coffee this am ms...sorry.. and thanks for the read babe. regina, be braile hands ms wood.. come visit my pages and let me disturb you with my dark word embossing thanks hon gs, sorry to bump you with that didn't realize it was sticking out that far... but hockey sticks are rather bulky ya know thanks donna for the wiggle [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-15-2002 07:48 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dark~ You have me singing early morning sigh songs. ~Slow hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger LOL this reads more like a wet dream than a smooth transition. Enjoyed |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good Morning, DS If it is but a sigh song, it is shouting. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
powerful poetry that causes us to read with our eyes - our emotions - and all of our senses - much meaning is found in all of that - great poetry as usual DS - Paul |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sometimes we ARE needed if not to bring but a moment of assurance.....that doesn't mean they have to admit it however. Much enjoyed and will have to read again a few times to see if I am even looking at it from the correct angle. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles over Karilea's comment) Yes, I agree with her, I think you are the master at writing poetry in split-personalities, looking at visions through the typical sense but also a Dali-like psychological or surreal sense that is extraordinary! (big hugggssssss) This is another wonderful classic, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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