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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2002-07-15 12:30 PM


Liar Liar
Caffeine Free
2 liters pouring out of me
Times three

Silly Clown
balloons and glory
Caffeine Free
2 liters pouring out of me
Times three

Fear of fire, rain and clouds
Silly clown
balloons and fury
Caffeine free
2 liters pouring out of me
times three

Wind Striking at my face
Silly Clown
Balloons so weary
Caffeine Free
2 liters pouring out of me
times three


This poem is reflecting my fear of clowns due to the movie based upon Steven King's book "IT"! I have been afraid of clowns since I saw it.  Can anyone tell me what they see when reading it? What lines in this poem confuse you? What does caffeine free have to do with it? 2 liters pouring out of me? times three? what do you see? I am curious to know . After I see what you think  I am saying in this poem maybe 5 people repling their ideas I will tell you the true meaning!


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Krishankins
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since 2002-06-23
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1 posted 2002-07-15 12:45 PM


It reminds me of a chaotic fairground at night, and being a young child that is lost among a bad dream that's came to life. I like it!!
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