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Ode to the Artist of the Sunset Mural
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Ode to the Artist of the Sunset Mural |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Ode to the Artist of the Sunset Mural The sky is colored with charcoal tints and shades of your soul that swirl and fly in a celestial sea that feathers your grace The vibrant shade of a peacock feather merges with the underbelly of a wren the lavender abandon of the rose has been swept into the opening begonia Your blue has so many seasons and to set into the horizon of your day is to glimpse a color wheel that has swirled and fused majestic and where the fire sits into the sea the desert sand has called and been blessed with heated sulfur until the sky melts The dark bound earth has feasted laying awed and captured has called in the cicada’s charm to hold the heat in perfect harmony rock me in the sand of your landscape under the cactus lay me down fill my need with rainbows of your whim and nurture my dreamy dare with majesty you are my artist ---- repost for Taylor 7-00 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Martie, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, I just know Taylor will be delighted to read this, this is a canvas of love and surreal wonder, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Martie, Many images of delight. Except I think that is too close to the cactus.  Thanks.If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Your blue has so many seasons and to set into the horizon of your day is to glimpse a color wheel that has swirled and fused majestic I love the way you give life to your words, Martie... ~ skyblue hugsLyra |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your blue has so many seasons and to set into the horizon of your day is to glimpse a color wheel that has swirled and fused majestic That is a beautiful verse Martie! You have a such a way of painting the scenery and bringing it to life! So pretty~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah Martie! You write such beautiful images....I love to take a virtual trip reading them....Bravo....dear poet lady you're wonderful! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Taylor must be smiling at the beauty that unfolds from you.... I know I am.... |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - such wonderful images with vibrant colors and lots of feeling. You painted yoru own mural in these very well written words. I loved the poem - Paul |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The sky is colored with charcoal tints and shades of your soul that swirl and fly in a celestial sea that feathers your grace The vibrant shade of a peacock feather merges with the underbelly of a wren the lavender abandon of the rose has been swept into the opening begonia Your blue has so many seasons and to set into the horizon of your day is to glimpse a color wheel that has swirled and fused majestic and where the fire sits into the sea the desert sand has called and been blessed with heated sulfur until the sky melts ================================== thats one hell of a muse...look at the beautiful images he inspired... you painted us a mural with your words...we can walk into it...sight, sound,smell, even taste the scene. Stunning write of description and detail Martie.. heart-hugs  Now for me some words come easy |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your pen paints so vividly, I could get lost in your colors. *S* This is beautiful, Martie. *S* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
rock me in the sand of your landscape under the cactus lay me down fill my need with rainbows of your whim and nurture my dreamy dare with majesty you are my artist --------------------------------------- Oh my!! The images you conjure up here Martie girl! Fantastic! I love this! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Enjoyed your "Ode to the Artist of the Sunset Mural" |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Lovely poem. P.S. Watch out for the catus!  Deb |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Noah--Taylor is the one that painted the mural..and jes he did enjoy my take on it in words..thanks sweet friend. Larry--I stay away from the real thing...this was just visual, but still so beautiful! Lyra--I'm so glad that you enjoyed this poem of color. Blues--Thanks for such a nice reply...glad you enjoyed the still life. Eric--I'm glad you came along on the trip..you are welcome anytime! Karilea--He smiles at me alot...thanks for yours too. Janet Marie--He has been a wonderful muse, more than once..heart hugs back to you! suthern--If you get lost, I'll come looking for you. Thanks dear. Nancy--Thanks for such a lovely reply. Sy--Thank you for that. Deb--The cactus is the soft kind..thanks for the read and reply. |
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