Open Poetry #21 |
Regret |
Daniel van Vliet Member
since 2001-08-31
Posts 80 |
Regret Like a pastel sunset, the colours of time smear, into a dark abyss, of shallow memories. A spiral of pain, slithers down my spine, clenching my last breathe, whispered upon the cold sea. Brown with flaccid fatigue, those dreams felt like sand, etched into ours hearts’, as one single word.... "regret". |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very good write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Daniel, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you, this is powerfully and sincerely said, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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