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Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2002-07-14 11:00 PM

one more tear?
what does it matter
another heart
alone in shatter

words tipped
in arrow’s bane
found its mark
in me again

I thought I had
put up the shield
closed the door
poured cement unyield

alas I heard
the fatal sigh
felt the blow
from arrow’s fly

then cackle of
archer’s voice
again I became
target of choice

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-07-14 11:01 PM

I know how this feels. Enjoyed!

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-07-14 11:04 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sharon, I know sometimes the arrows don't work out like you hoped they would, but truly there is always one true arrow of love out there that will always lead one to their true love! (sigh) This is powerfully expressed, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

3 posted 2002-07-14 11:06 PM

I love the feeling you convey here, PDV...
I think we have all felt this way at sometime in our lives.

~ hugs to heal your heart

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-07-14 11:06 PM

Oh Sharon, this just aches...
Good write...very well said.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

5 posted 2002-07-14 11:21 PM

Sharon, this could have been wrote for me. This is exactly how I feel.

Krishankins

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since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

6 posted 2002-07-15 01:13 AM

you hit the mark with this one Sharon!!
I'm lovin' it!!

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

IKNAP
Junior Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 47
Torrington, Connecticut

7 posted 2002-07-15 01:17 AM

WoW, this really hits home. i got goosebumps reading it. i know just what you feel Good luck hunny!!

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

8 posted 2002-07-15 01:20 AM

EXCELLENT writing PDV...
Smiles2u
*~coco~*

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

9 posted 2002-07-15 05:04 PM

thank you...I was sad yesterday.

bsquirrel

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since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

10 posted 2002-07-15 06:58 PM

Hope yr gladder today. I loved this poem, PdV. And, better yet, understand it.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

11 posted 2002-07-15 09:45 PM

I know the feeling well.
Hugs to you.

Deb

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

12 posted 2002-07-15 10:10 PM

I have felt those sad days and wonder if I am a target at times, also...
well written, PdV

I hope you are feeling better today.
hugsss
M

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

13 posted 2002-07-16 02:32 AM

I thought I had
put up the shield
closed the door
poured cement unyield

Stop, you're scarin' me! Guess, it's a chance we take, huh?

One blaze of glory - glory
find
glory
in a song that rings true
truth like a blazing fire
an eternal flame

Jonathan Larson 'Rent'

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

14 posted 2002-07-16 09:13 AM

oh this aches...beautiful penned

((warm hugs))
Charisma

redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

15 posted 2002-07-16 09:32 AM

i really love simplicity.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

16 posted 2002-07-16 04:42 PM

I've found that you have to move faster than the target. . .

hopefully, better today. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

17 posted 2002-07-17 09:53 PM

How many tears must we cry ?
How many times must our heart be broken ?
How many time will love die ?
How many words of love have we spoken ?

After each heartbreak we have but one thing to look forward to "Happiness"
Really enjoyed the poem.

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