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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 When the world seems so against you and you can't tell black from white If you feel you've lost your way and nothing is going right~ Take a look around you gaze at the company you're in If they're headed a different direction you may just need to turn around and follow the lead of friends~ For there is comfort in friendship that brings us to higher ground Nothing like friends pulling together to turn the impossible around~ *One photo ... two thoughts of inspire~ /pip/Forum70/HTML/002054.html ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
You did a great job on your two thoughts sweet Marge. I really, really love them both  TitiaLike scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling heart sister of my soul and writer of life’s truths and wisdom, your thoughts of inspire simply leave me agog. Truly exquisite darling girl. I love what you did with one image, I love it utterly utterly utterly. Admittedly I love all your writing but, sometimes something especially you pops out the inkwell and these two gems are something very special.  Love and warm stuff As always Slushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent Margie Gal... I'm off to find the other thought... ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
For there is comfort in friendship that brings us to higher ground Nothing like friends pulling together to turn the impossible around~ Right on Marge! This is wonderful! You're amazing! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Marge, of the two, this is my favorite, but both are great  Love the photo, too. Sandra |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: You're right, sometimes we need to go with the flow! I have this picture on my screensaver. Loved it when I first saw it. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Marge, You're pretty smart for your age!  Well done as always.If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love these black and white creatures, Marge. I've never seen a zebra in shades of grey... Are you the one in the middle who is going the wrong way? LOL ~ black and white hugsLyra |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge, this really shows your talent to be able to use one picture with two thoughts. I love it! |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Amazing Marge, that you've used the same picture and present different perspectives so perfectly well. I really liked this a LOT!! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
But the view looks exactly the same????? Did the zebras just switch places??? *confused look* LOL... I couldn't resist. *G* I enjoyed both poems very much! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Titia~ Thank you, dear ... just seems that I was no sooner done with one when the other tapped me on the poetic shoulder~ MarshaLove~ Thanks sweetie ... I just have to try to keep doing what I do~ (whatever that is) Enchantress~ Thanks gal~ ETHome~ You managed to choose my favorite line-of-thought~ Thank you dear~ CatalinaMoon~ Mine too ... thanks dear~ BettyLou~ Now WHY doesn't that surprise me ??? Thanks sweet friend~ Larry~ LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL Thanks guy~  Lyra~ That'sa me !! But, but ... I can be gently persuaded ! Sometimes SuzieQ~ Thankee gal ... maybe it's just my 'split' poemsanality~ MyCafe~ Thanks girl ... I appreciate you ~ SuthernGal~ Just so you won't feel like the only BLONDE on the planet !  LOL... I couldn't resist. *G* *HUGS* to all of you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Marge, just read "Dare to be different"..this complements it very well indeed! congrats on such a creative write!(but then you ARE always creative)  |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
LOL Too funny Cold hands means a warm heart |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
:-)~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [This message has been edited by suthern (07-16-2002 08:47 AM).] |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
I like this poem too - nice contrast with being different - the wonderful energy given to us by the tension that is so well presented in these 2 poems - loved them - Paul |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
This is great too! I like both views! Frienship is such an awesome thing! Hugs Cindi |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Got the *Suthern* giggles this morning~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
To be foolish, silly, happy To reply with comebacks snappy Was that ever really me? Will that person again be? Probably not, I'd have to say But you've brightened up my day! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetestSuthernGal~ SEE !!! I TOLD you I was having a *Suthern* day ... you flit into my thoughts on the morning rise .. then *RING* goes the phone ... SURPRISE ! (NOTHING EVER really surprises me anymore !)  It was beautiful talking to you sweets~ Tee-Hee ! ... I WON the Scrabble game ... (did you have ANY doubt ?) Now ... what's that *hug* around your neck ? It's ME !!! AND ... true friends NEVER get tired of lifting a friend~ Honest Injun !! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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