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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-07-14 05:48 PM



Loves Me/Loves Me Not

Some day we will meet
and when we do you will look into these eyes
that change their colors when mooded by you
and the depth of me will seep into your heart
and you will realize at that moment,
who I am.

Some day you will see the spirit in me rise,
become aware of my shades, the hues
that blush me when I am warmed
by your presence and know the truth of
who I am.

Some day you will be the one,
who walks up to me, slips arms around
and surprises me with the touch of lips,
not wanting to waste time, getting to know
who I really am.


M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (07-14-2002 05:55 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-07-14 07:12 PM


Keep living on the hope, dear lady. Hope happens more often than not, but will you cope so serenely as your beautiful words, when it does happen?
Kind thoughts,
John

Grass won't grow under feet that don't move.

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2002-07-14 07:16 PM


Thank you MM...I am confident about my feelings...it's always the other that worries me..
~smiling~
M

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3 posted 2002-07-14 07:16 PM


Maureen darling heart, ohhhh this is gorgeous, I love these heart dreams of yours they colour your writing with an ethereal hue of delight. Exquisite writing, simply exquisite This is indeed something special since it shows the view of you as your dreams unfold for you, it reveals your soul dressed in beauty’s gown The lines of this delight are superb, truly awesome. I love it utterly utterly love it


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2002-07-14 07:18 PM


Sometimes Marsha, your responses give me lines of poetry to be inspired with..Thank you dear heart
hugsss
M

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