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Open Poetry #21

Judgement

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2002-07-14 02:20 AM

A judgement came to quickly
Chatted only but 5 minutes
Deemed wrong
for speaking right
told no when really it was yes
Believe me why are people so cruel

Brittle bones I have
Klutsy I am
Not the best
Not the worst
But it is true

I break a bone here
I break a bone there
You think I have begun to care
You think this is really rare

Goodnight Godbless
I hope you well
and I wish you on your way

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-07-14 02:37 AM

Hey Kellie,
What's going on?

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

EternitysHorizon
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 145
Twilight's Orchestra

2 posted 2002-07-14 05:05 AM

Broken bones mend.
It would seem the softer flesh that forever holds not only the scar, but too often refuses ever to heal.

I am no doubt way off the mark.

Still and all- better times to you.

Eternity

Where rainbow touches earth
place your foot upon the light illuminating forever- EternitysHorizon
Often see, rarely touched
Rise if ye seek to see

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

3 posted 2002-07-14 11:15 PM

I talked to someone one AIM last night who was from passions who was quite judgemental and I wanted to voice how he made me feel without hurting anyones feelings. Hopefully before some one judges he will first look at what is beyond the rainbow or beyond the cover.

This is just to show my opinion of judgement and it is actually a nice poem

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