Open Poetry #21 |
No one's home...................... |
ambermize Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 157California |
First loves I have come to think, Are not supposed to last, But meant to teach the way to feel, And be left within the past. Becuase loving someone that much, Can't be fair to your soul, Needing someone deep inside, Just to make you whole. And tears that flow so freely, And bleed down deep inside, Should be kept in safe regard, Not engulfed inside his lies. And words that burn the lips to say, Should never have been spoken, To lose myself agian like that, Would surely leave me broken. Pain that glows in moonlight, As a heart must sleep alone, Comes at once to realize, It can be no one's home. |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
And words that burn the lips to say, Should never have been spoken, To lose myself agian like that, Would surely leave me broken. Those lines were great and well writen. I felt alot of emotion from them. I wish i could say that second and third love can hurt less if they end but i can't love is love. i hope things work out for you. There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all -Creed [This message has been edited by baerlon (06-13-2002 12:40 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so true, so true...and i love this one very much! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Oh preach on sister Ambs...rofl you know you're right...at least in my experience... Love you sis!! Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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