Open Poetry #21 |
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What if..." (answer to DeVine...) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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If this--tonight-- he would die? Bet--tomorrow-- I would cry. If I saw him open-eyed wonder of unrealized... I would weep until head pounds-- haunted by his living sounds. I have been a companion-- he has been adoring eyes... anger just an onion skin-- all of life? a compromise If tomorrow, he were dead? I'd beg they would wake me, instead. [This message has been edited by serenity (06-13-2002 02:37 AM).] |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
We always wonder if in passing It’s only a shadow we’re casting And if once the carbon shell is gone Will anyone notice we’ve moved on I’d like to think something’s lasting When this short mortal time is done If nothing but a piece of poetry Or a sweet memory Gloom |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Its really wounderfull , I like it very much ....... I love to nice poetry. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I want to see what you see. . . this is amazing. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
All I can say is 2 thumbs up Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
That which would cause you so much pain upon its loss should then be cherished today. deVineism |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I have to agree with Sharon, don't take a thing for granted--but then, don't let anyone do it to YOU, either....sigh... (I just write the stuff, never claimed I lived it---grin...) Thanks much...party girl is tired now... |
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