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I Have a Nose
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I Have a Nose |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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And so it goes the face has a nose live bodies must breathe this one tries with ease as hot tempers seethe and true airs are inspired nostrils flair keen to detect sweet scents of a woman? an infant's downy fresh odour smells of a gas guzzled motor perils of life forked tongues taste the air turbunates rarify what is there nostril hairs filter moistened dust warm inhalations generated from cold gusts... it's shape given to describe racial contexts or taken to be a mark of character, is this what matters? [This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-13-2002 07:49 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
LOL Your poems are too funny Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Martin, it matters not the shape the size but of a nose we must revise our opinion and surmise that breathing is the noses prize Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Keth, very good answer in a poem, quite liked that  loner_23 My nose is complemented..hehe |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
After seeing the title, I just had to come see. Very trippy, and perhaps a touch cute. Cool.
"Silly bunny, there are no monsters in here." - Chrys, from Gloom Cookie [This message has been edited by Anvrill (07-13-2002 10:08 PM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
thanks for reading, look forward to seeing your posts |
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