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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2002-06-13 02:32 AM

I've got to hurry
Must get there soon
To Jupiter

He's watching the skies
He waits for me
Lighting the way
So that I can see
How to find my way
Into his arms
His tender kiss
& Gentle charms

He's waiting for me
I can?t be late
I'm almost there
Can't hesitate
I'll climb
the highest mountain
Beam me up
Can't get enough
Of his love

That's why I hurry
Pass the moon
To Jupiter
I've got to hurry
Must get there soon
To Jupiter

He shines so bright
I must reach his star
I'm almost there
Yet it seems so far
I reach out my hand
To this man
Hope he knows,
I'm his biggest fan

I've got to journey
Pass the moon
To Jupiter
I've got to hurry
Must get there soon
To Jupiter...

~Tier {R.T.}
11/27/98

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."
[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (06-13-2002 02:40 AM).]

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2002-06-13 01:10 PM

"Fly me to the moon and let me play among the stars
let me see what life is like on Jupiter and Mars."

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2002-06-13 04:26 PM

hey Jupiter. . .

make sure that you leave a seat for me too Tier. . .

great work. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-06-13 04:27 PM

I love the details. Hope to read more of your stuff.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2002-06-13 05:30 PM

I enjoyed this one.

Nan

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2002-06-13 05:34 PM

Enjoyed this...James

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

6 posted 2002-06-13 08:23 PM

You've translated quite a feeling of urgency with this one, Tier. Wonder do they have postcards on Jupiter?!?

Forgetting all I'm lacking
Completely and complete
I'll take your invitation
You take all of me

Lifehouse

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

7 posted 2002-06-13 08:26 PM

Don't forget your sweater, Tier...I hear its cold on Jupiter....
I love the urgency in this poem...you portray it so very well.

~ hugs to Jupiter

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-06-13 08:30 PM

Allll aboard for the cosmic express
to the stars, on past Mars

Like this Tier...so much urgency within the
words....HANG ON TIGHT!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-06-17 10:19 PM

(smiles) Oooohhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, I too felt a dire desire filling these words, may you find your home second star to the right and in Jupiter's embrace forever! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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