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Street Poet
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since 2002-07-07
Posts 82


0 posted 2002-07-13 05:52 PM


Have you ever thought that you'll never meet that special someone
Well, I do all the time
Which inspires me to write these poetic rhymes
As I see girls everyday with the wrong person
Smiling on the outside but inside she's really hurtin
Makes me sad to see girls with guys who just wanna be thugin
Why go through all that trouble
When she can be with me getting some superlovin
She rather have a guy that looks like a rapper
Then a gentlemen who she can live happily ever after
This is really hurtin my heart
Because she just realizing he was wrong from the beginning
And I was right from the start
I don't ever think I'll meet that special someone
Because love eludes me
And most of the girls I like are cruel to me
So I'll stay home all alone
A warm human slowly turning to a man of stone
And all this because I'll never experience true love
I'll just let my thoughts about being loved start to flee
Now all I can do is admire other peoples love and wish it was me.

[This message has been edited by Street Poet (07-13-2002 05:54 PM).]

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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-07-13 07:01 PM


Awesome

Cold hands means a warm heart

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2002-07-13 07:07 PM


I believe we all get opportunities...prepare yourself...your day will come...James
bsquirrel
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-08-06 01:39 PM


Very gentle and sweet.

Said if I only could ...
-KB

Elan
Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382
State of Wide Eye
4 posted 2002-08-06 02:01 PM



It's oft said
when you stop looking
it finds You...

you'll know when...

LilTai
Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189
United States
5 posted 2002-08-06 10:34 PM


Hunny i promise you'll find true love eventually, with sucha big heart like yours. I wouldn't worry..Love will find you when you're close to giving up, and when you think you'll never find her, you'll find ur queen...

"True love is hard to find
Just let it find you
For real if you found love
then keep it real..."
-Slum Village, Tainted Love

This poem is dope..i love the flow of it. you got a real skill at rhymin'. I really like it a lot.

One last thing..always make sure ur heart stays warm, don't let urself turn hard, u know? Too many bad men out there already, don't let a lil' discouragement keep you from bein' the man you are. Keep ya head up, you'll find love

   Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

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