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Stolen Kiss
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Stolen Kiss |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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So gentle on my lips, the kiss, you thought that I was sleeping Into my blissful dreams of you your tender kiss came creeping... The secret act of your desire stays with me through my waking This stolen kiss grows softly in my heart yours for the taking... Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh don't you love those stolen kisses the best? Loved this.
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you, Mysteria......and yes, they are the best when they are stolen!!! Glad you enjoyed.....  Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Stolen or given...long or short...hard or soft...I like them all...James |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
and I believe we all need those little stolen kisses!! thank you James...it's always a pleasure to see you in reply... Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
How sweet this is. Happy poetry-what a concept  Sandra |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi lil sis... yes, there's a time for sadness, and a time for happiness, and right now I believe one should enjoy the 'happy' as they would a surprise gift! Thank you and Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooo sweet, dearest friend, may your heart forever be kissed with bliss and heavenly love! (sigh) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh Noah, thank you for the sweetest of replies, and the special wishes!! Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Splendid! I loved it! Gentle, romantic, slightly sensual. The perfect combination, my friend. I love the length as well - fit's the poem to a 't.'My only thought of critique is this line: "The secret act of your desire stays with me." Stays affects the flow of the line, and the poem to me. Perhaps "is with me - through my waking?" Just a thought. Sincerely, Titus As I'm out there, walking, searching, for myself, for you.... won't you join me? Let's walk this journey together. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is wonderful just the way it is! Best part about stolen kisses is having the person who did the stealing.... give them back.  ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Can't put one over on you.....can I still kiss ya? Nice work very enjoyable read! |
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