Open Poetry #21 |
Forever Love |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
from the moment our eyes met, i knew you were the only one for me in that instant, my chains were unlocked and you set my spirit free our union blessed by angels singing, as tears of happiness we both cried having you by my side, swells my heart with both love and pride the winds changed that day, the day our souls became one in that moment the world stopped but our life begun no longer were we alone, fate finally caught up with time i knew in the moment we met, that you were destined to be mine everytime we touch, I feel the love we share deep inside my heart everything can be traced back to that day, when we first got our start each day that passes, i think of your face and i can't help but smile for you are beautiful in all ways, in you i just get lost for a while your laughter is music to my ears, your smile brings joy to my every day just when I think I couldn't love you more, suddenly breaking through comes a new way I thank God above, for giving me such a rare and precious gift it was in that moment, that I became truly happy, given the ulimate lift when the breeze starts to blow, and i feel it warm and soft on my face I also feel your fingertips playing across my skin, and am mesmerized by your never-ending grace your hand fits perfectly into mine, as your lips touch mine soft and true I sit here staring, can't help it for I'm so captivated by you we share our souls, like two mirrors, each knowing the other inside and out with you i never have to question love, i am left without a single doubt this love so strong, it was built from a friendship strong and true everyday since then, i've continued to fall madly in love with you when times get tough, as we both know they will trust in this love, it's both strong and real if the ocean of life gets rough, my hand will be reaching out for you take it, and hold on, and watch as one by one, our every single dream comes true. Jena, I love you! "you can't stop the rain from pouring down can't stop the world from turning 'round can't stop me from loving you no matter what you do" [This message has been edited by Aimster (07-13-2002 02:59 AM).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, this is marvelous, and such a beautiful expression of real love! I am drawn to the words: 'in you, I just get lost for awhile'....that is perfect, and describes how love should be. Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
your laughter is music to my ears, your smile brings joy to my every day just when I think I couldn't love you more, suddenly breaking through comes a new way this is so beautiful...someday I hope to feel this way again.... thank you for sharing hugsss M |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you and Jena forever share a life of true happiness together and be there for each other during each rough time! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ay, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy darling lil sis of my heart, ohhhh this is gorgeous, I love these heart dreams of yours they colour your writing with an ethereal hue of delight and. Exquisite writing, simply exquisite This is indeed something special since it shows the view of you that was and what now is, it reveals your soul dressed in beauty’s gown The lines of this delight are superb, truly awesome. Yet again you’ve written something that will stand through all time and sing the words of your souls truth. I love it utterly utterly love it Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wonderful writing, and wonderful to see you happy again. Now remember not to forget what you have. Rainbows may brighten your day but they are hard to catch. *HuGS* Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
we share our souls, like two mirrors, each knowing the other inside and out I liked those lines so much Amy! Love the way your heart writes itself! This read like a windsong in the softest breeze. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A very beautiful tribute, Amy... ~ hugs from the heart Lyra |
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