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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2002-07-13 02:54 AM


from the moment our eyes met, i knew you were the only one for me
in that instant, my chains were unlocked and you set my spirit free
our union blessed by angels singing, as tears of happiness we both cried
having you by my side, swells my heart with both love and pride

the winds changed that day, the day our souls became one
in that moment the world stopped but our life begun
no longer were we alone, fate finally caught up with time
i knew in the moment we met, that you were destined to be mine

everytime we touch, I feel the love we share deep inside my heart
everything can be traced back to that day, when we first got our start
each day that passes, i think of your face and i can't help but smile
for you are beautiful in all ways, in you i just get lost for a while

your laughter is music to my ears, your smile brings joy to my every day
just when I think I couldn't love you more, suddenly breaking through comes a new way
I thank God above, for giving me such a rare and precious gift
it was in that moment, that I became truly happy, given the ulimate lift

when the breeze starts to blow, and i feel it warm and soft on my face
I also feel your fingertips playing across my skin, and am mesmerized by your never-ending grace
your hand fits perfectly into mine, as your lips touch mine soft and true
I sit here staring, can't help it for I'm so captivated by you

we share our souls, like two mirrors, each knowing the other inside and out
with you i never have to question love, i am left without a single doubt
this love so strong, it was built from a friendship strong and true
everyday since then, i've continued to fall madly in love with you

when times get tough, as we both know they will
trust in this love, it's both strong and real
if the ocean of life gets rough, my hand will be reaching out for you
take it, and hold on, and watch as one by one, our every single dream comes true.

Jena, I love you!


"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

[This message has been edited by Aimster (07-13-2002 02:59 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2002-07-13 04:41 AM


Oh, this is marvelous, and such a beautiful expression of real love!  I am drawn to the words: 'in you, I just get lost for awhile'....that is perfect, and describes how love should be.  

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!
  
    


nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2002-07-13 05:53 AM


your laughter is music to my ears, your smile brings joy to my every day
just when I think I couldn't love you more, suddenly breaking through comes a new way


this is so beautiful...someday I hope to feel this way again....

thank you for sharing
hugsss
M

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-07-13 01:01 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you and Jena forever share a life of true happiness together and be there for each other during each rough time! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ay, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
4 posted 2002-07-13 01:35 PM


This is so beautiful.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Marsha
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Maidstone Kent England
5 posted 2002-07-13 08:00 PM


Amy darling lil sis of my heart, ohhhh this is gorgeous, I love these heart dreams of yours they colour your writing with an ethereal hue of delight and. Exquisite writing, simply exquisite This is indeed something special since it shows the view of you that was and what now is, it reveals your soul dressed in beauty’s gown The lines of this delight are superb, truly awesome. Yet again you’ve written something that will stand through all time and sing the words of your souls truth.

I love it utterly utterly love it


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
6 posted 2002-07-13 08:09 PM


Wonderful writing, and wonderful to see you happy again. Now remember not to forget what you have.
Rainbows may brighten your day but they are hard to catch.
*HuGS*
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
7 posted 2002-07-13 10:47 PM


we share our souls, like two mirrors, each knowing the other inside and out

I liked those lines so much Amy!

Love the way your heart writes itself!
This read like a windsong in the softest breeze.

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
8 posted 2002-07-13 10:52 PM


A very beautiful tribute, Amy...
~ hugs from the heart

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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