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Life's lessons...can hurt
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Life's lessons...can hurt |
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akira Member
since 2002-07-13
Posts 79Idaho |
Lifes lessons Life’s lessons of mercy passing me by Life’s lessons on joy passing me by Life’s lessons of love passing me by My life is empty My life is lonely My life is hollow You’re alone too You’re lost too You’re scared too Why are we alone in this world? Why is life passing us by? Why are we trying to survive? If life has no point If life has no meaning If life has no value Then why live in the suffering Then why live in the pain Then why live in the sorrow This world is tearing me apart This world is driving me insane This world is torchuring my soul My thoughts beyone my control My memories driving me to the brink of insanity My mind trapped and tortured Akira |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Felicity, this is so very sad, sweet friend, yet so powerful, I love the emphasis of your criesd here by the use of repetition, it echoes with great volume! (sigh) I know how hard it must feel to be alone, but believe me, while the meaning of life may feel vague now, soon many promises will be made for you and lifes joys will be yours, just keep believing in yourself! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Felicity, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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akira Member
since 2002-07-13
Posts 79Idaho |
Thank you for you replies...i'm posted on other forums....its nice to have someone tell me i'm doing things right..i so often feel as though i'm messing up and stumbling around in this world...at times its as though i'm lost and dont know what to do... Akira |
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