Open Poetry #21 |
Your Whisper |
rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Your Whisper I can feel your whisper dance across the curves of my heart, warming my senses as I get lost in your gift of love. "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
That was beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may loves whispers always sing to your heart and make you happy forever! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Dancing on those curves can be a tricky thing. He must be REAL Good. Enjoyed the sentiments in this one. |
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akira Member
since 2002-07-13
Posts 79Idaho |
great poem...i love it....its so sweet...and tender.... Akira |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
So very sensual, deep, yet lingering. Like an exotic perfume that is still there, filling the spirit with pleasure....great writing here....... Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I am glad you all liked it. My muse is not that kind anymore. It's nice to know that some people are still reading. [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (07-13-2002 09:57 PM).] |
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