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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-07-12 10:41 AM

Feeling You

Although we come from different worlds,
many miles apart, I trace the patterns
that your body leaves behind,
whenever you must return to yours.
I can only tell you that feeling you
when with me, takes my breath away
and when you are gone, time stands still.

Whenever I need you, you are always there,
no distance too far, no drive too long,
each made up for by our moments together.
Even the coolness of the evenings
are warmer than the summer heat
when your lips reach mine,
and the passion that exists
cannot be explained in words,
though I am trying.

They don't come easily to me anymore,
for the power of your existence,
the real of your body, becoming one with mine,
leaves only a hush to be heard.
Your lips say "I love you",
their kisses have no limit,
as gentle replaces the passionate,
and I remain yours, when you must leave,
retracing all that you have left behind
in memories.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (07-12-2002 10:50 AM).]

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

1 posted 2002-07-12 10:43 AM

you put it in words very well here Maureen - this poem is filled with sensual romance and love - I really liked it - Paul

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

2 posted 2002-07-12 10:43 AM

wow...O...wow

regards to you,
sudhir

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2002-07-12 10:45 AM

ENJOY

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2002-07-12 10:47 AM

Maureen,
how soft and sensual. This poem has traces of you all over it.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

5 posted 2002-07-12 11:04 AM

Maureen darling heart this is perfect and so very very true. It echoes with love and desire, truly sensual and divinely passionate, I love the trace of love that overlays this like a veil of wonder. YOU shine darling heart you really do. This is superb writing and I love it utterly, as always the phrases flow down the page in smooth and truthful cascade.

Absolutely perfect writing and I love it well written and always special from you. I love it utterly utterly love it

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2002-07-12 11:56 AM

Paul...my first friend on aol online was named Paul..so Ihold that in high regard

I love to write romance in a sensaul way leaving the mind to wander between the lines....
Thank you, Paul

hugss
M

Sudhir... I regard your "wow" as a pleasant experience..

Thank you

vandana ..its a pleasure to se you , Thank you for reading
M

Kethry...It actually has traces of someone else... you made me smile this morning..it's about time huh?
I love your signature it's beautiful.
hugsss
M

and Marsha, my favourite cheerleader.. (see, I even spell it for you the "right" way)

hugs and thanks for your supportive nature,
Always,
M

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