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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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leaves are friends when they float to the ground riding the breeze whispering quietly their solace in rustle stories they talk to my feet as I walk and make soft damp music from old tree concerts strumming the leather of earth and soul when I lay down to rest beside the stream they are my friendly blankets like when I was a child they console me with their sooth sides and under now as I feed the worms and roots their nutrients my friends the leaves join me in harmony of soundless decay ©Dark |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It IS a circle... and we should learn better to always be at one with our surroundings... Excellent! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
the neverending circle of life. well written Dark. Even in death there is light. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and make soft damp music from old tree concerts OH yeah...there's a nice little path I know...past an old pool, overgrown with palmetto...tis lovely, the way the patterns play there... funny, I know this place, and I have never brought another being there...I just go there to fish for bass. And? I always let 'em go, too...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunshine..thanks babe, good morning to you too "tea lady" gs donna, there is something good in everything babe..just we don't see it sometimes, thanks hon serene 1..well now you know why the worms there work so good..(wink) thanks for the read and yep, would love to go fishin with ya some time. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger And the song goes on. Enjoyed |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
But for such of wind and rain the sound remains the same yet whispers quite differently to those that step with love Inspiring stuff there Mr. Dark..regardless of its cycle of depth..you are exquisite. Sincerely, Reg |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Your whispers are as profound as ever, DS. *s When you think you have read it all, |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sy, thanks my amigo... regina, thanks ms flattery will get you on my lap (grin) got velcro? chanson' mmmmm nice to see you ms been a thousand days it seems you chirp me to smiles thanks hon [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-12-2002 08:22 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dark~I so much enjoy your morning whispers.. ~slow morning hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS I would fly, dangle my feet in oceans of air, back stroke above the street, my hair like black rain if I were not dirt bound, my nails filled and pungent with earth, each breath a memory that holds me. I loved your poem! |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
DS - great poetry - wonderful earthy images to carry with me the next time I wander through the forest - thanks for the poetry and the images - Paul |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dark, you are one with the earth and how naturally this poem flows. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
enchantress.....come visit me? no wait, that don't sound right...come walk on me..no wait..grrr well thanks babe for the read and smile (wink) ms martie, I do enjoy your earthy and your soiling of thought that way, thanks for your review babe, big hugs from the sun goodknight sir, much thanks in a most humble nod to you. I appreciate you paul Kethry, thanks ms K, so pleased that you read and enjoyed this piece. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh my gosh, this made me smile so much reading this because it reminded me of going outside in the autumn and playing around in the pile of leaves on the ground! (big hugggssssss) This is sooooo beautifully and naturally uplifting, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I could smell Fall! It jumped right off my screen!!! Neeraja |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
noah...thanks my friend neeraja, thanks so much for your read |
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