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Daniel van Vliet
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since 2001-08-31
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0 posted 2002-07-12 12:56 PM


Understand?

She killed herself...
I tried so hard, I pleaded....
do you understand,
can you understand?
What am I to do now?
Through my faith to the wind
Close my tired eyes
and wish for tomorrow?
Don't tell me its not my fault
Don't tell me to be strong
I care not for your pity....
I just miss her so much.

© Copyright 2002 Daniel van Vliet - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2002-07-12 05:43 AM


I understand.
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-07-12 06:13 AM


Yes how can you not miss someone you loved or cared for...nice expression of your feelings...James
angelswing
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since 2000-02-10
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3 posted 2002-07-12 09:34 AM


When you care about someone, your emotions will be on play with everything; All you can do when you lose someone close to you is let them live on in your heart and memories - whenever you think of them they will be watching you from a better place; move on and do what they would have wanted you to do, just remember them the way they would have wanted . Dear friend, I can see your in a lot of pain . Give it time and you will find a way to go on .
L.of.L. Tom .
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catalinamoon
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4 posted 2002-07-12 09:31 PM


I do understand.
Hugs
Sandra

Goodknight
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5 posted 2002-07-12 09:36 PM


each person who experiences this has their own experience that none of us truly understands but many of us have experienced the same and we understand through that...Paul
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6 posted 2002-07-12 11:05 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Daniel, we all understand with all our hearts, sweet friend, my heart goes out to your loss but know deep down her love will always guide you and she will never ever forget you! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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7 posted 2002-07-12 11:06 PM


I know how it feels when I am away from Liam.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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